This is a cormorant, a water bird common to my area for those of you who don't recognize it. They are one of my favorite birds to photograph because of how unique they look up close. It's almost like looking at a dinosaur or a dragon with their bumpy skin, scaled beak and brilliant green eyes. They are very expressive birds and I enjoy just sitting and watching them interact with each other, especially during breeding season. The male and female do a beautiful dance where they intertwine their long necks (not so easy to see in this pose but they do have long necks) and "sing" to each other. They are actually black birds and my picture here is very blue, the original is not so vibrant, but when the sun shines on their wings the glossy sheen is a blue gray color. I recently invested in a professional photographer to take new images of all of my work (well the pieces I can still get my hands on anyways). It was money well spent! The new files all represent the work as it looks in real life and so much more of the details can be seen. As of now I've reproduced about half of my inventory - it's an expensive and time-consuming process. And I've been forced to do something I HATE ... dreaded watermarks!! Recent thefts have forced me to reevaluate my views on them so you'll see new files from me with my website strategically placed here and there.
I love cormorants, when I visited Morro Bay and SLO these guys were always seen on the sand beds at low tide or roosting on the rocks. They always had the most melancholy calls in the evening!
Vision: Excellent use of colors and detail. The beak is spectacular, I really love how you captured the mosaic like pattern of their beak in the sunlight. The lighting on this is great, it really brings expression to the artwork. The eye looks so real, and the scales around it really bring it to life.
Originality: No one paints these birds. No one. So I love that you chose such a unique animal to include into your gallery, I can only wish that his head was turned slightly more to the viewer, instead of a strict profile. But again, that is a very small preference, the detail you included really makes up for it, because it captures the curious almost mischievous expression of this species.
Technique: While I love the colors, and the detail of the feathers, the overall artwork seems a bit rough to me, not in the sense it looks unfinished, but the feathers look to be almost grainy. When I see these birds their feathers look slick as oil, and there are not many robust highlights to bring that out. However, the subtle lighting on this one makes up for any need for him to be improved much overall.
Impact: Overall, I love this work of yours. Maybe more than others because these birds bring back so many memories and joy from visiting the more northern beaches. Really great job, Heather!
This is absolutely, totally stunning. It actually made my heart skip a beat for a second Very well done, looks like a photography, you should be incredibly proud of this work.
Thanks! It just depends on how successful I am with my process - some pictures go smoothly like this cormorant and I'm done in a week - others I struggle with and it takes me a month. I LOVE these birds and as with anything else - when you're inspired things just come easier.
Vision: Excellent use of colors and detail. The beak is spectacular, I really love how you captured the mosaic like pattern of their beak in the sunlight. The lighting on this is great, it really brings expression to the artwork. The eye looks so real, and the scales around it really bring it to life.
Originality: No one paints these birds. No one. So I love that you chose such a unique animal to include into your gallery, I can only wish that his head was turned slightly more to the viewer, instead of a strict profile. But again, that is a very small preference, the detail you included really makes up for it, because it captures the curious almost mischievous expression of this species.
Technique: While I love the colors, and the detail of the feathers, the overall artwork seems a bit rough to me, not in the sense it looks unfinished, but the feathers look to be almost grainy. When I see these birds their feathers look slick as oil, and there are not many robust highlights to bring that out. However, the subtle lighting on this one makes up for any need for him to be improved much overall.
Impact: Overall, I love this work of yours. Maybe more than others because these birds bring back so many memories and joy from visiting the more northern beaches. Really great job, Heather!
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